FIRST SCENE DRAFT SCRIPT

By Anonymous -

First draft of scene one

(scene starts)

Joe is in the toilet and the camera is facing him when a group of boys walk into the toilet block

Josh c – mate I’m fucking dying for a piss

Josh h – same here bruv

(pushes past the boys and runs to the loo)

Sam d – Oi, did you shag that bird last night then

Josh c – ragged her mate

Mike c – proud of you bruv

Sam d – anyone else game for sparking up

(josh h quickly turns around)

Josh h – called Bs

Mike c – called Cs

Josh c – well there’s no point me calling Ds is there, there will be nothing left ffs

Sam d – sorry hard (pause) jonny hurry up and go for a piss I want to go up field

Josh c – you lot go, I’ll catch up  

(the boys leave but josh c stays and turn around to go to the loo)

Comments

  1. EdgyMedia1 May 2018 at 05:07

    NJO - I can see you have gone for a realism approach (similar to Tight Jeans). Consider the later, more serious and meaningful parts of the conversation when the character is in the toilet. How will you transition from the 'banter' to the severity of the situation?

    Focus on the storyboard for now so that you can see how the whole product will work together. Then come back to the script and add in more detail.

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SCRIPT

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Scene one (Scene starts) Sam is in the toilet and the camera is facing him when a group of boys walk into the toilet block Jonny – Mate I’m fucking dying for a piss Cam – same here bruv   (Pushes past the boys and runs to the loo) Tyler– Oi, did you shag that bird last night then Jonny – ragged her mate Danny – proud of you bruv Tyler– anyone else up for sparking one (Cam quickly turns around) Cam – Bs Danny – Cs Jonny – well there’s no point me calling Ds is there, there will be fuck all left Tyler– sorry hard (pause) Jonny hurry up and go for a piss I want to go rec Jonny – you lot go, I’ll catch up   (The boys leave but Jonny stays and turn around to go to the loo) Scene two (Scene starts) The boys have left and Jonny is finishing going to the loo, he hears the pill pot drop and turn round and starts to walk towards where he think the noise is coming from Jonny – you okay in there  (Looking at the doors) Sam – yeah I’m fi...
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