Izzy Beattie

First draft of scene one (scene starts) Joe is in the toilet and the camera is facing him when a group of boys walk into the toilet block Josh c – mate I’m fucking dying for a piss Josh h – same here bruv (pushes past the boys and runs to the loo) Sam d – Oi, did you shag that bird last night then Josh c – ragged her mate Mike c – proud of you bruv Sam d – anyone else game for sparking up (josh h quickly turns around) Josh h – called Bs Mike c – called Cs Josh c – well there’s no point me calling Ds is there, there will be nothing left ffs Sam d – sorry hard (pause) jonny hurry up and go for a piss I want to go up field Josh c – you lot go, I’ll catch up   (the boys leave but josh c stays and turn around to go to the loo)

Main characters analyse Josh Costello Name – Jonny   Age – 17 Part – the boy that tries to stop the other boy for over dosing on pills Background Little money in the family Comes across as a bad boy who does drugs with his mates Seems like he doesn’t care about school/ people Has to put an act on in front of his mates as he does not want them to know that he does care about school and people Joe kilbane Name – Sam Age – 17 Part – the boy that tries to kill himself Background Has a well of family Lives a normal life Comes across like he has no problems Lost his mum in the past year    

The help  first ideas   There will be a boy trying to kill himself in a toilet block There is a group of boys in the toilet they all leave but one That boy hears the pill packs Boy one tries to stop him but he cant open the door The boy blacks out and we don’t know if he dies or not Location In a toilet block A door in between them Characters Josh   Costello (the boy that helps the boy trying to kill himself) 17 Male Bad boy   Joe kilbane (the boy trying to kill himself) They don’t know each other 17 Male Extras Sam Deakin (years 11) – stupid one Beginning only Mike Collins (year 12) – druggy one Beginning only Josh Huggins (year 12) – smart one   Beginning / helps Josh at the end as he walks in Props    Orange pill pot Fags Clear little bag Green grass Clothes Trackies ...